Sunday, January 31, 2010

A Free Critique!

A while back I sent two random paragraphs from Kisses & Lies to the So You Want To Be Published blog in the hope of getting a free critique. Frankly, I forgot about submitting it. Imagine my surprise the other day when I was scrolling through the blogs I follow and saw my name mentioned in the text of a blog! It actually took me a minute to realize it was my work being reviewed.

Here's the post.

I am editing Kisses & Lies now. You can bet I'll be paying careful attention to those verbs.

Thank you, Mary deMuth, for hosting such a super blog that is always full of great tips and thought provoking ideas! And thanks to both D'Ann Mateer for the critique and the commenters for their observations. Now, I'm psyched to get back to work on editing this story.



  1. Thank you for bringing that website to my attention. You might also like the website!

  2. Thanks for the tip. I checked out I think I'm going to sign up.

    And thanks for stopping by.